I can't look at it any more... I need extra eyes. Does anything look horrible in this? Do you find it readable? It's my handwriting, so it's going to be messy and sloppy, but it should be legible and not hurt your eyes. The letter spacing should be sane, and it should all kind of vaguely line up on the baseline.
To give you an idea of how far I've come, this is where it was last night when I went to bed, and this is where it started out.